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Hello! I've been playing this game through many of the updates over the last few years, and with the wait for the next version taking longer than anticipated, I thought I should make an account and make a few comments on the game myself.


First, I do want to applaud the idea of a modern and relatively normal VN, ironically these types of VNs seem to be more rare, at least from my recent poking around. Also, I'm eternally grateful for the "lesbian mode" toggle, actively making sure that Rita is gay without ever having to do anything with a dick. The only thing that could be nice if previous chapters do get a touch up, would be some additional dialogue or scenes with Rita coming to realize her interest in girls, since IIRC she starts out more curious than super confidently confirmed lesbian.

Second, I do want to just echo some of the comments about some of the girls just kinda vanishing after a little bit, but that seems like it's been noted and remedied for the future.

Lastly, something has been bugging me. Now, I'm not sure what it's like if you're not on lesbian mode, but despite there being several scenes dedicated to Rita's curiosity and experimenting with anal sex, it's always seemed weird that it was only an option for the one scene. I feel like if she decided that she really enjoyed it, she would ask or have it be an option for more scenes in the future. Maybe that's the case, but so far from what I've seen and can remember, right now it's just "I'm curious about it. Can we try it? Oh, I like it, thanks for helping me" then nothing.

That's all I have to say, thank you for the game, it's fun to wander around town as an experimenting lesbian slut, curious to see where this game goes in the future!

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Hello, and thanks for the detailed feedback!

I do plan on improving the older chapters and adding a bunch of new content to them, especially for the lesbian side of things. I agree that Rita's interest in girls should be developed more. 

You bring up a good point about the lack of anal content with Lesbian Mode is enabled. I'll be adding more anal scenes in the future, as well as options for Rita to select either vaginal or anal during lesbian sex. 

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Thank you for the response, and I'm glad that my feedback was useful! It seemed a bit strange that no one had considered double teaming Rita in any of the 3somes, even if it was just sliding in a finger or two. So it's good to hear that I'm not alone in that thought!

While I'm thinking of it, one thing that might be interesting for the main girls is to have them all into something different or have more preference for certain options presented. Like maybe Rita tries to introduce Luna to various kinks as the giver instead of receiving. Or Violet is the go to girl for Rita to ask about kinks and her thoughts on them, then try them out together. Or it could be something more simple and straight forward about them whenever things get sexually charged between them, like Violet prefers tribbing and vaginal, or Haruka prefers giving/receiving anal sex. Actually that last one would be funny if Rita's into anal and is a little nervous asking her old friend about it, only to learn that she should have asked her instead of Violet. Just something that crossed my mind, and it's not like these would have to be something that only those specific are in to and exclusive for. Maybe just some extra dialogue from them pushing for something or talking about it or whatnot.

Just another idea that popped into mind after talking with another dev who had decided to make each girl have a specific kink they were in to for some simple, extra flavor to them.