Your game is outrageous, floridly obscene, and hilariously lewd. I love it. Thanks for the update.
(I wouldn't worry too much about writing errors -- they don't impact comprehension for the most part, and alongside the verbosity, alliteration, 4th-wall breaks, etc., actually add to the effect of an enthusiastic, cumdrunk writer that couldn't keep their other hand out of their pants while typing.)