ty for posting this! you made me notice some mistakes in my own attempted transcript of the game. (i do wish it had subtitles...)
i have some corrections i'd make for your transcript, if you want them (apologies if this comes off as nitpicky at all! that's not my intent):
• "Trees all engraved in" -> "Trees all grey and thin" (the phrase "thin grey trees" is also later used in #8)
• "a cut path" -> "cut a path"
• the first word after "weird little" is "clearing" (but there's still more garbled speech after that)
• "she'd implied" -> "she'd imply"
• "Went down there a couple times a ............. mad." -> "We went down there a couple times not long after we first met."
• "I give it to you and we crawl down [...]" -> "and I'd give it to you and we'd crawl down [...]" (i think)
• "Those trees wider than" -> "Through those trees, wider than"
• "Pieces of summer sheen" -> "Pieces of some machine"
• "where we'd stop and" -> "where we used to stop and... hang out." (still more garbled speech after that though, before "finish each other's sentences")
• "A puddle and piss soaked mattress" -> "Little piss soaked mattress" (i think?)
• "the way you talked to her" -> "the way you talked, or... something"
• "Had to get away from the suburbs, the streetlamps, and gables. All dim and oriental and evening lit." -> "had to go all the way through the suburbs. Street lamps and gables all dim and orange and grey in the evening light."
• "When I got to" -> "Then when I got to"
• "Just across from the fences" -> "Just across the lane from the fences"
• "clean houses like the stories we always imitated. We were alone." -> "clean houses like out of the stories we'd always imitate when we were alone."
• "most days when I found" -> "most days 'til I found"
• i don't think it's "little balls hanging off", but i don't really have a better suggestion... best i've got is "little bowls of sweets" but i'm not sure that's correct either...
• "your mother said she'd done in the city sometimes" -> "your mother said she bought from the city sometimes"
• "leaning against each other" -> "and lean against each other"
• "it was a part of something more" -> "it was something more"
• "the moth themed sleeping bags" -> "the moth-eaten sleeping bags"
• "whispering to each other" -> "and whisper to each other"
• "I walked into the trees like I always did." -> "I leapt into the trees, the bit where I always did." (i think? not 100% on 'leapt', but i can't hear 'walked' personally)
• "and finally found it" -> "and then finally found it"
• "Felt like not longer than that." -> "Felt like... a lot longer than that." (not 100% sure on this one, could go either way. i think the latter maybe makes more sense though? maybe not)
• "wires and footsteps" -> "the wires and the footsteps"
• "I didn't follow because" -> "I didn't follow them, because"
• "The kind of families who" -> "The kinds with families who"
• "Thought it might still" -> "I... thought it might still"
• "wondered if you had other houses built out of" -> "wondered if the unfamiliar houses had been built out of"
• "If the people there now had somehow" -> "And if the people living in them now had maybe"
• "You said all houses" -> "You said all the houses"
• "I stopped" -> "Y'know, I stopped"
• "Like I tripled" -> "Like a child"
• "I'll." -> "Well." (the first one)
• "I'm so sorry" -> "And I'm so sorry"