I like the story so far, but I do agree with some others that the transitions are a bit much especially when they can just be the standard transitions. I'd say, only use the fancy ones when something important is happening and leave out them standard PowerPoint transitions, they just dont really fit and feel very 2013 internet esque, making them feel outdated and just kinda cringe at times. But besides that, great job and looking forward to play the following updates!