Definitely potential here. I like the direction. Story seems interesting and renders are great. It was a bit confusing at times though. The part with the rat king was funny but I had absolutely no idea what those scenes were supposed to mean. Felt too nonsensical.
I don't know where you're going with the 2 ego's. It seems like one is gonna be submissive and the other dominant. I didn't really like how submissive the MC was being with Nyxi when I picked dominant and without the players input, it goes against femdom being avoidable. If that is the case I have to say I wouldn't really like it personally and don't think it would be fun. For people that like both it's fine but for people who like one over the other they would like half and hate the other half of the content.
With Nyxi I wanted to turn the tides with her and put her in her place and was pretty disappointed. While I do appreciate it was avoidable all I could do was just end the scene. Wanna conquer that muscle bitch Axel too. I hope we're not just shoehorned into one side depending on what ego we're playing.
But overall it's pretty good.