Literally made an account just to comment lmao. I love the story so far! There's an interesting hook with her powers and the fact that Sauron is our dad. I did read below in one of the comments that we somehow travel to the past where Frodo and Sam have been killed which got me even more intrigued. Currently, I find the strongest points are the OST, writing, and that it seems you've got passion ^_^ I've only recently gotten into lotr and hobbit, so I was craving some more fantasy stories. And I gotta say it's very rare to find a well written story like this, so I'm curious to see more :D. I have unfortunately noticed the usage of AI within the art; however, I understand you view it more as a tool and understand that some people have their reasons for choosing so. I want to overlook that right now! I would've loved to offer my aid in art; however, I'm still learning how to draw :' ).
Either way, I would like to underline that you've written everything amazingly. I especially liked how you gave every character a realistic feel to them, such as the mc actually having some flaws that got her in trouble and seems to still get in trouble with how carefree she can get. Writers, for some reason, can stray away from ever writing or showing flaws within a character so I'm happy to see that. One thing I would like, though, is to see a more gradual shift and a reaction from the mc to her powers. For instance, after she and Tharndir went to Porto's place for a visit and she triggers her ability to a point where she faints, I think it would be good to add some more scenes in between to show what happens afterwards and perhaps a sequence event that connects with her deciding to be a maid. I have noticed that you plan on adding these features so I won't stay on it for too long. I hope this has helped and hope to see more from your work ^_^ best of luck! And if there's any writing tips you'd like, I would love to help out further!