That was FUCKING AMAZING. When I saw "chapter 2.4" I was expecting maybe 2 hours tops. 6 hours later I'm sitting here in the middle of the night writing this post absolutely floored.
There's too many things to praise so I'll just pick out my favorites.
Lyna
She's so angry and impulsive and reckless and indecisive. I loved watching her waffle between emotions once her mom showed up and I'm loving how manipulative she is! She adds some spice to what could've been a wholesome but run of the mill (as the fetish goes) incest story
The Music
The choice of music (and sounds for that matter) are HUGE in productions like this. It's so easy to just grab any of the myriad Kevin MacLeod tracks that everyone uses. And hell, in most cases they work just fine. But when you hand pick a song(s) for a scene or better yet create one? It doesn't just hit, it SLAPS. I cannot underestimate the escalation from excited to hyped when the right track kicks in at the right moment.
The buildup
The pace feels good. You could've bolted to the finish or drug it out an eternity and still had a good narrative either way. But as it currently stands the gradual escalations are nice. They're enough to tantalize and frequent enough that you don't feel like you're just clicking through to get to the next spicy bit (not that I'd want to, the story outside of the lewd is quite engaging as well). The only thing that felt off is the rate of progression with the mother. Things felt like they progressed unnaturally rapidly with her. However, for her to spurn the one while clinging to the other? It makes for a zesty dynamic that makes me less inclined to dislike her sudden boldness.
All that to say I absolutely cannot wait for the next update and I will be subbing immediately xD