Hey, It would be nicer if you gave more context to the game. Have more speeches, rather than all of them cramped up in one speech bubble. Also, the UI is very difficult. The user interface is the most important part of the game, it explains to the user how to interact and play this, you struggled explaining what to do in certain parts of you game.
Otherwise, Great Game and great way of showing your creativity and imaginary.
Keep Up The Good Work!