I literally LOVE this smm, obsessed and fueling my ROTTMNT fixation rn fr
there is one minor pronoun issue on the last page of chapter 3, btw, with this line:
"Raph grumbles at Donnie’s words, tight-lipped as he keeps looking at her instead of Donnie, “Raph just doesn’t like that we’re lying to him.”
I have the pronouns set as he/him, and I think there was a typo or smth. this is literally perfect fr tho