It's really good. I like the writing, the dialogue and the characters. I really love Ivona's design, and I'm expecting more. 1 thing of note, during the final sex scene, when Ivona "rolls backward smothly and slowly", she's not wearing her bindings.
Haha, whoops. Good catch! I updated it with her bindings for Chapter 4 but completely forgot to update the old version.
Thanks for the kind words!
