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This game would be more fun if:

1) skip dialogue

2) if you accidently get a choice option, you can quit to not make a choice

3) i there wasn't bugs with leaving 'sticker wall'

4) if there was another passcode quest taht doesen't involve 'hole'

5) if there were more dialogue options with your colleuge, just simple talk? woud make game a little bit more replayable

6) if there were number of endings and how many you've already got or just a progress meter in percents

7) last but not least the last ending erases all the progress, it's inconvinient if you want to get all endings

Also, a second part would be great! Good luck! Hope this comment is helpful

P.S. Don't bother with mistakes, I'm not a native speaker

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UPD: I know you wanted to makes endings more subtle , but some of them seemed too vague. Example: 'parents'. Maybe you should add some sound effects in each ending to make them more horrifying and impactful/ You can reverb sounds or layer one onto another to  make something unique. Maybe you should use more sound alltogether to convey specific atmosphere.