Writing is not bad, there's some interesting things happening, but like 70% of the time I'm just Theothore not knowing why things happen. Even when the first ending drops there's some lose ends and like that's normal for a "police like" genre VN, right?
The peace of it all... it's seems to me WAYYYYY to rushed. Guys, this all happens in one week?!?!?!? The romance is forge way too early, those two get to meet 2 days and blam, suddenly in love????? Also the let's add to our spy agency this 0 experienced guy who also failed to do it's improved task the day before thing????
Don't get me wrong, when those things hit they are very emotional and I like them but I think it could be done better or something...
Love the charming/calmed music, the blurred background art is brilliant for the story, these really tied the experience as a hole. I really like the new sprites rather than the old ones hopefully Rou, Javier and the rest can be updated to some flashier sprite work.