Well, you asked for reports of noticed grammar issues, during the intro theres one.
as mc is giving us the premise, one line is written 'When the shelter-at-home eventually order came down...', ofcourse order and eventually being the wrong way around.
I'll update as i replay. Also is there anyway to prevent seeing the Alice flashback sex scenes? I have 0 interest seeing her force herself if i can help it. Next to that all the annoying inner monolgue. Sick of sitting on a single frame for 2 or 3 minutes as i have to read whatever overly explained troubles our guy is going through. She tugged you off, you groped each other on the couch, she sucked you off as you fingered her, however despite all your rules on safety, you would rather run out into an apocalypse than talk to her maturely about stuff, when you only have to return to the apartment anyways? Kinda stupid really.