Needs a bit of work, for starters, put the milk in one of the fridges - had to come watch a video here to figure out where the hell it was lol. The pancake box looked like burritos, and $9 for everything? What a steal!
During the 2nd half, the fail state sets you back a bit too far imo. I accidentaly clicked the bed and had to restart because of the guy hiding under it - I get it, I heard the foot steps and the epilogue explained why he was there but like.. why couldn't I just stomp his head in lol. Decided to gamble on a bad ending and let the knocker in, expected to die, but not to be put all the way back in the garage, maybe change it to when it's time to clean trash?
Crunchy pizza for a microwave, and the TV was off while eating on the couch? Mad man! Jokes aside, this was a pretty good job for your first full-on attempt, keep it up and I'm sure you'll only get better. Good luck to you