I was surprised by how engaged I was in this. A bit sad that all the characters have the exact same body-type, I'd have liked to see some diversity in stature. Some of the characterisation, mostly on Beta, was a little on the weaker side, but overall I'm very happy with how this is written. If you can keep up the quality of this, all the way through the production, you will have a brilliant little game on your hands. Good work.