Loved all the art!

Cute art! And I really liked the story, especially the ending and the lines there :O
Overall a neat little visual novel :)

Nice Story and Artstyle! The only nitpick i would have are that there is no Music to listen to while reading the Story. But other than that its a solid VN!

Ooh! It's nice to see the Dialogic plugin in action!

Charming art style. Fun references and oooh an interesting story!

I can hear Shiori saying some of the dialogue lines too. Good job!

I think if you clean up the art, spell check the texts a bit and add music/sound effects, you have a solid game. Not that it's bad in its current form, just a bit rough around the edges.

I enjoyed the story! :)

I adored this game's story and artstyle, I think it's close to perfect. Just needs a bit of music to help set the mood