You need to look at my comment on the project hadea page. I think your handling of the MC's trauma response to being raped needs work. I have gone through horrible shit, so have people I love. Give the character a chance to out him for what he did. Give us some kind of catharsis in between killing him and just pretending it didn't happen. And yes, it is rape, though on the PH page that word is very obviously avoided. Sex under false pretenses is rape. It is something that happens, so seeing it in writing and movies and stuff isn't inappropriate to me. As long as it is handled well. I really believe this part needs serious reworking.
This is a great story, but this specific part just feels like it needs some fine tuning.