Since version 0.3, we have had a proofreader (BirdmanGA). It is a visual novel, so grammar is one of the most important aspects. We care a lot about it. Sometimes things slip through, but that is why it is still in early access, and we have special channels on Discord to report any grammar or typo issues.
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You need to redo the intro and get a new guy then. There are 20-30 mistakes in the intro alone. It only got worse from there, lines are frequently missing punctuation, misgendering not only the main character but also others(there is literally only two guys why are some of the girls being referred to as he? and why is the MC referred to as a she?), the dialog box also has the wrong name for when a character is speaking multiple times, and finally the MC's thoughts are frequently not marked in () when they should be.