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Really nice game. I can see a lot of effort was put into it. There are a few things I want to say about it though and I hope you can improve them:

Firstly, I would like you to insert a little more instruction, tips and tricks into the game. With these types of games while talking with the people, they might give a clue about the game or how to progress. It is pretty hard to do it on my own with little instruction (to none) that was given.

Secondly, you should really fix the bugs (like the one where I can't save my progress), there are a few and it would be a shame not to take care of them. It is rather difficult to play knowing there might be something wrong with the game.

And last but not the least, FIX THE DIALOGUE. You might not be a native speaker, but it is painful to read the script. There are so many grammar mistakes and so many typos it is infuriating. Ask someone fluent to help you. The story could be so much better if you could just correct that.

Good luck

Thank you for your feedback, I've gathered up a few bugs and I hope I will release a new build of the game with some fixes especially to the save game issues (there will still be some zones where you cannot save your game in, this is intended, but there are a few that are unintended right now.., and fix the load non-existent save crash) and I am guessing that the dialogue was more problematic in the early parts of the game, I will pour over it again and try to fix as many mistakes as i can ,but i am sure i will still miss some.

Anyway can you tell me with what aspect of the game exactly did you struggled that you needed guidance with? (the controls? not knowing where to go next?...)