Despite how short it was, this seems pleasantly promising! A little disappointed that muscle is only a side fetish, but you take what you can get I suppose :p
Otherwise, I'm still really looking forward to what comes next. My favorite part was going back and trying out all the Nylah scenes, they're done really well in my opinion!
Also I'm not sure if it was you specifically who implemented them, but I feel like this game shows that a good ui goes a long way, with how smooth and dynamic it feels, much better from the static boxes that every other game uses. Can't emphasize enough that I love how that makes it feel so much better to experience.
A critique I have is the overuse of ellipses, feels like it just drags out dialogue or descriptions more than it needs to. Other than that I'm not a fan of the cruelty stuff but given that you've put the option to skip it anyway I'm very much more than happy with this product, and I'm super excited to see future updates!
Oh my, thank you so much for the kind words, really appreciated!!
Very delighted to hear you like what I did with the UI! Glad I'm not the only one who thinks it definitely enhances the experience.
As for the critiques you give, that is definitely fair. Sometimes I do think I'm overusing them, but I'm trying to do it less. :)