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I agree, the biggest takeaway I have about my writing is the lack of using narration.  It made it extremely difficult for me to portray the story.  I was told by a teacher back in high school that I relied on narration too much in my creative writing, and that I needed to stop.  I took that critique way too literally, and it hurt all of my stories in the jam as a result.  This is exactly why I wanted to take part, so I can know my biggest pitfalls before I go any further with my other project.

That, plus not doing any creative writing for over twenty years is not a good combination 😕  When the jam is over, I plan to temporarily disable my stories so I can go back and rehash them a bit.  I may delete the second one entirely, as, while it is a fun premise, I executed it so poorly that I would probably be better off doing it from scratch.

I'm the kind of person who hesitates and never gets anything done, or I jump in with both feet to get baptized by fire, there's no in between!