I had a look at the code in the latest version, the conditions differ from the notes. The progress trigger would be:
Joyce = 0
Anna >= 9
Daisy >= 38
Douie >= 19
Mae >= 15
Pixie >= 8
The progress for Daisy needs to be higher, so the notes could use an update. You also should use version 3.0 of the game, as there was a bugix in it for Joyce:
Unblocked Joyce's first visit which was previously hindered by Anna's schedule