Spoilers follow:
Theme: You didn't have to say expanded worldview (especially as it doesn't feel too present yet if one doesn't engage with being nice with the macro). Macro is enough, even if you made it into attack on titan/some pacific rim?
Story: Okay, this is maybe me, but I was laughing at the narrative more than I was buying into it. The dramatic death scene felt comical to me.
The prose felt utilitarian overall, telling me what was happening without giving me a chance to experience it.
The cow was inconsistently southern, which made me feel he should always be more southern, or have that quirk removed.
DON'T DRAW ATTENTION TO THE SQUARE CUBE LAW GIVEN THAT MACROS CAN'T EXIST UNDER IT. YOU'RE PUNCHING A HOLE IN YOUR NARRATIVE BY POINTING TO IT.
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Story aside: Is the implication of the ancient wolf hunters that this is universe with the feral to anthro pipeline? Or is it just a roundabout way of saying "my ancestors were closer with nature and hunting and whatever"?
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Presentation: Some things ended up unintentionally funny, like the jump up the screen onto the snout, as opposed to it being like an up and over sort of movement. There were I think missed opportunities for SFX, Peppekez.... like the running.
The backgrounds didn't perfectly mesh with the narrative in the forest section-- the view of the mountain on the head didn't match to the prior screen of the open clearing onto the head.
I did appreciate the stone woofing, and the good use of the full body though.
Creativity: Not the attack on titan with the two blades. Aough. I did like them waking up from their long time slumber though, and it's amusing how you went fully macro amongst the other size-queens of the game jam.
Overall thoughts: Surprisingly funny, although I don't know if that was the intent.