Very very well written! Really proud of you for trying something new and kicking so much ass! 

Creepy atmosphere, great use of the text adventure medium! Cant wait to see what you do next ;)

Cool game! I like the narrative. I also tried making a detective / mystery type game, albeit I think yours has a better plot line. I wasn't so sure about the ending but I think you rounded it out well and I was satisfied after finishing it. Nice job 🤠