Cold and gloomy colors are reminiscent of a dark laboratory in which ominous events take place. Interesting ship or bottle design. It is better to add water space animation to the game. Nothing is known about the character and the author does not provide information about the main character. It's bad that the game has no dialogues and characters. An abstract world in which there is a super, fashionable bottle of water or a ship that can possibly protect a person from thirst. Technical problem, if I walk down the bottom left of the screen, I teleport to the bottle. The player teleports from room to room inside the bottle. Add the backstory of this world and character. Resolve the issue that caused the game to break. See possible solutions in other Bitsy games with free access to game files. It is not clear what kind of world surrounds the player, how he interacts with the bottle or ship, why the animation of opening the hatch into the bottle or ship is not shown. I think we could add more objects and animations that linked the player to the action and backstory in the game.

I liked realistic visuals, exquisite design, creating feeling of something cosmic. In the end, this is what Bitsy ultimately lacks. Can't say anything about the gameplay since it's unfinished. 

Narrative part though is impressive: game about unfinishedness of a game speaks beautifully with well made design and description. In this case, the description of the game is a part of this art-installation and the 'about' of the game is not what's inside of it, but the reality of its developer's creative work, in which player is looking. The contrast between what was announced and what was done, I think, can be considered a technique.