this was a pleasant surprise. I thought the story was excellent. The theme to it was very interesting. The obvious mystery was endearing. Enjoy quite a bit of this visual novel. There were some times for the pacing did get a little slow. Other than that I really can't complain other than the fact that it seems like it's been dropped.

Lovely

Write more dialogue, it was pretty funny.

A masterpiece, plain and simple.

Things feel a bit rushed and like there were a few minor/character building scenes left out but it's a nice story that touches some good topics, just the execution could have been better.

This is nice for your first visual novel.