A very intriguing and compelling reading. Every character had their own voice and I enjoyed learning about Reimu’s viewpoint. The presentation was pretty nice too (backgrounds, colors, choice of font). The music was good but I admit I also found it a bit distracting. I agree that the use of silence would have been a good choice. You could also  consider using ambient sound effects. Picture the falling rain, or a ticking clock when you wake up in the SDM. The ending **SPOILERS** makes we wish ZUN would age the characters as the years pass. It's something I've thought about as well. ** END SPOILERS**

I’m happy that you made a game AngryCow! I hope to see more games from you and the team in future jams.

I've only played Kogasa's Route with a friend of mine but we were fully engaged with it and I'm really interested in checking out the rest of the routes! I really dig the concept n.n!

Favorite Parts: The deep character development, introspection, shades and nuances of the hole in the roof TT_TT

BGM is really good. I should look up how to develop the visual novel this way.

Really good VN. Poor Sanae.
Bit confusing with outcome sign posting, and some of the text options are vague as to if they are letting someone down gently, or if your reacting in the expected way. 

Dude that word count, hahahah. This word count may deter some players. But at the end of the day, this novel is an intelligent and thoughtful piece of fan fiction. The word count was well used.

- The biggest (but only) flaw is that there are lots of typos and grammatical mistakes, so much that it was often hard to read and understand... It should go without saying but a novel with such protruding flaws is... Well you know.

- This issue wasn't big enough to fully get in the way of enjoying the storytelling though. The writing is just exceptionally good.
  The characters are all so nuanced, and Reimu's inner thinking is so in-depth, one could almost feel her mind.
  The story, the dialogues, the choices are all amazingly told. It's an excellent mix of entertaining and serious, in a way that feels very relatable and almost real.
  My favourite part in this is certainly how the game plays off typical tropes. I have never ever read such a big subversion fest before. Like, "reverse dating sim" ijbol. And of course it's with girls who fit the typical archetypes. Like, what have we here... The klutzy secret admirer, the business partner with more than professional interest, the overly hardworking and collected housewife material, the childhood friend rizzlady, and your Bollywood mom who's arranged your marriage. Have we missed any one here?

-The title screen and backgrounds look really good. I like the way the backgrounds are used and shown. It's simple but it's good enough to set the mood.

- The music was much enjoyable during the reading, the number of arranges in there is impressive.
- Loving how the songs even fit the characters. Klutz Sana's theme is just perfect. But my favourite song is the True Ending's theme. The original is one of my favourite Reimu themes already!

What do you mean "Don't sweat this kind of small details". Do you mean that when two girls kiss -

This was great! I don't think I've seen Yukari being a sinister presence in Reimu's life before in a fanwork. A helicopter mom who can literally hover around you, how scary! In general this was very unique. My only criticism is with the music; the songs themselves are great, but I think their implementation wasn't the best. The music could be distracting, Marisa's in particular. I would have preferred just silence for some of the more serious moments. However, I can't praise the refreshingly mature writing enough. Next to Yukari, I also really liked the way Sakuya was characterized. The true ending made me choke up a bit, haha. Great job all around!!!