i finished the game and it’s pretty good! i can see how it all comes together but perhaps the writing could be improved a little bit. at the end, the player claims that the chief researcher sabotaged their own thing, but it didn’t feel convincing that they would destroy their own hard work just because someone wants to steal it. it would make more sense if it was accidental or someone jealous. there were also some piques of interest that could make things more complicated but didn’t feel fully connected with the story, perhaps if you have the time you can expand on the love triangle thing.
i love the actions mechanic and the additional murders. i think you have a very solid foundation and it’s a fun game to play. good job!
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i finished the game and it’s pretty good! i can see how it all comes together but perhaps the writing could be improved a little bit. at the end, the player claims that the chief researcher sabotaged their own thing, but it didn’t feel convincing that they would destroy their own hard work just because someone wants to steal it. it would make more sense if it was accidental or someone jealous. there were also some piques of interest that could make things more complicated but didn’t feel fully connected with the story, perhaps if you have the time you can expand on the love triangle thing.
i love the actions mechanic and the additional murders. i think you have a very solid foundation and it’s a fun game to play. good job!
Thank you. I've never made a game like this and writing what the hardest part, I'm not a writer.