You did a good job with the photos, mood, and story line! They all harminize together very well, and if feels like you are reading an exciting and erotic story! Nice work!
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A Day In Paradise's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative | #9 | 3.418 | 3.625 |
| Horny | #10 | 3.771 | 4.000 |
| Kink | #12 | 2.828 | 3.000 |
| Sound | #16 | 2.357 | 2.500 |
| Harmony | #20 | 2.711 | 2.875 |
| Stealth | #21 | 1.768 | 1.875 |
| Overall | #23 | 2.593 | 2.750 |
| Aesthetic | #28 | 2.357 | 2.500 |
| Novelty | #28 | 2.003 | 2.125 |
| Play | #29 | 2.121 | 2.250 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Great job, of the games I played this is the best as pure erotica. I appreciate the effort you made to characterize Lia and Eduardo, knowing them a bit made the scenes much hotter when we do get to the sex. Once we get there, the sheer variety stood out.
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Escape from Erulon Vwhoa! it's rare to see a photo of a person in a thumbnail here; strawberry jam has generally been overrun with furries, haha
a classic smutty VN, with fairly effective use of background art, given that you had to rifle through publicly available photos. in some ways that's harder than drawing it yourself
the background music loop seemed REALLY short for a game that's going to last a while because i'm doing a lot of reading; i actually had to mute it after a while because it was getting distracting :(
the narrative builds well and the pacing is good! i felt like a couple details got dropped on the floor, though? like there's a lot of implication about wild fantasies that eduardo's ex wasn't willing to try, and the reveal was that... he could never get her off? i guess? that seemed like a lot of buildup but i was confused by the payoff. later he referred to bdsm as "tame", too, which seemed like it was resurrecting that idea and leading somewhere exotic, but then didn't.
i admit i played pretty late at night and didn't go back to try other choices, so i might've missed something, or maybe just happened to make choices that avoided some important dialogue! also i have a rather extreme idea of what "wild fantasies" means, so i might just be miscalibrated for this haha
overall it's what i'd expect from a real-world porn vn! thanks for entering!
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Rogue IkeFirst of all: Thank you for taking the time to play our game!
We are very happy about your positive comment!
Both of us are aware of the shortcomings, like the monotone stock music we had to rely on.
We are planning on an update in which we will work on several issues, like character development and coherency.
More stock music will be implemented, and also a few more choices to pick from, which would include new locations and scenes.
We want to be proud of our products, so we listen to comments/critiques to improve our game and ourselves within this working process!
Thanks for giving us the opportunity to participate in this jam.
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