oh the writing in this was exquisite. Not too fancy to the point of being overbearing, but just poetic and charming enough to feel fantastical, punctuating the story itself. I also quite enjoyed the non-linear narrative and how that was presented gameplay-wise

I just thought it pretty neat. I liked the world-building even if it was a little bit vague and slightly too complicated towards the middle/end, but either way that seems to be the intention lol

My only critique is that it's too short. I love games like these, and have a general preference for heavily text-based games, so this is perfect to me. The relationship between them is just awkward enough to be both believable and adorable. 

Awesome work devs!