Incredible writing. Incredible characters. The metaphorical allegory of the two protagonists fucking through Love Letter's "Pen" and Eight's "Landmines" is one of the best non-literal sex metaphors I've ever seen. Kudos to you, Ms. Witchdog. I love your work. I am excited to see more.
I really enjoyed the cuteness and simplicity while quickly becoming very creepy. I don't think i have an exact idea of the unknown but its mysterious and unsettling and i love that