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A jam submission

Old man jackView project page

Submitted by bluscoots96 — 35 minutes, 56 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research + Development#114.0004.000
Documentation#153.8003.800
Overall#243.2803.280
Presentation#272.8002.800
Creative#303.2003.200
Technical#352.6002.600

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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  • Really good to see this project break down in the document with honest reflection. Very clear to see your passion for the character as well. Some feedback we would give to you is to explore the texturing more especially with regard to the skin and clothing (Patterns are a very important part to the texturing). One thing we would suggest for the future is to put more time into the cover image as this is crucial for capturing first impressions and we felt there were stronger images within the document that could have been used instead. Very impressed to see you learning Marvelous during the project. Good work!
  • Its great you managed to get around so many technical difficulties and produce the character. Characters can be quite difficult especially when so much can go wrong in the process, but you managed well. I would suggest looking at doing some short studies, a head, torso, arm, in poses, might be quite good to continue your zbrush learning. Also a process tip, if you take the marmoset final cloth, duplicate, zrmesh, up res, project from previous version, smooth in places, panel loop, you have a thickened piece of cloth 😉 Good work so far, keep practising!

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