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A jam submission

The Lone RunestoneView project page

Search For A Star 2023 - "The Depth of Winter"
Submitted by stolesomelemons - rob (@stolesomelemons) — 2 hours, 13 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Final Presentation#233.0003.000
Technical / Workflow#233.0003.000
Research + Development#243.0003.000
Project Documentation#333.0003.000
Overall#422.8002.800
Creative Development#482.0002.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • hi Rob, Research + Development Looking good, however you would need a back story for such simple scene. Technical / Workflow Need normal baking process and trimsheet. Topology on the rock looks good, the axe topology seems to heavy though. I'd take out at least one span out of two. I wish I could see Uvs. Creative Development Textures are the strongest point. But overall the difference of realism between the simple geo and the texture hurts. Also the axe blade might by too cartoony. you need to hit a better balance between stylized and realistic and more researches on those would have helped. Have a closer look to the work done for how to train your dragon. Final Presentation Need video presentation, greyscale, wireframe renders. Alexandre Quintin - senior hard surface artist - VFX Industry

Challenge Tier

Search For A Star

Chosen brief

Environment Art (Standard)

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