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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Documentation | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Presentation | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Technical | #9 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Overall | #10 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Creative | #14 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Research & development | #14 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Nice character, clean and efficient modeling. Good use of texturing for hair.
The facial and body sculpt are really well defined, from what I can see, a great sculpt all round. The topology is good apart from some issues with using polygons in some places unnecessarily where as in other places excessively. That’s some thing you will learn in time. The only thing I’m really unhappy with, with the topology is the coat looks smoothed so its not sharp on the edges.
Anyway a small trick, and ive done the same thing myself, with the chain, bake it to a plane instead of modelling it in.
The texture looks great, only gripe would be how the coat has more mud than the boots, look for more balance basically, and be aware that the small bump on the mud looks slightly odd, perhaps a blur on there too might have solved it.
I love the project, the stylised and the realistic, in fact the realistic one, if you have time, I recommend you finish, cause it would really shape that folio too, they look so far from each other, it’s another project.
Thank you it was a pleasure to mark, it’s a great looking project and well presented too.
Your Name
Georgia Adamson
Challenge tier
Final year & Masters students
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