the writing is interesting and the music sets up the ambiance quite well. But the gameplay is quite janky throughout all the experience.
For example, theres objects the player can interact that only display "text" in the dialogue box. Also, sometimes you can interact with objects even if they are not in front of the player (Like the big chest in the end, that you can interact being like meters away from it). And i think the transitions from room to room are a little sudden, especially when involver doors (Just walking in front of the door in the beggining teleports you to the room).
But, in the context of this being a game jam version, this mechanic issues can be overlooked just for the story. I think that it has great potential, just needs time to blossom in something great! Also please, make possible to run, walking gets stale pretty quick
I didn´t see that story coming.