Really liked the story, seemed like the start of a cool visual novel! Theme was a cool spin on the prompt. (My fingers hurt from spamming the continue button though) 

Always love seeing hand drawn art in games, the idea of dormant memories was a cool take on the theme

I really liked the visual style

Great work. Your team clearly put a lot of effort into crafting a narrative experience. Unfortunately, this just is not my type of game though. I also really appreciate games that use a hand sketched art style. It's just not done enough. 

Visual novel type gameplay is really hard to approach, although it was really hard to understand where the narrative/protagonist is at, I can definitely see the effort that went into the writing and base mechanics of the game. Making assets look nice in a short amount of time can be very difficult, but if you know what tools you have (with a tone of practice) and more unique ways to mechanically tell the story, im sure it has a pretty good shot at doing well.