Oh, what a wonderful story!! Right off the bat, you had SUCH a strong start. Your art is very stylized in the most wonderful way possible, and you've been able to capture such strong character personalities through dialogue alone! And the writing was so snappy, such a pleasure to read. 

And I was pleasantly surprised by all the puzzles you've included!! Frankly, the last one with the code didn't work as well (I had to click in a very specific place to be able to turn it, and I still don't know what that place is), but everything else worked well c: 

What would help your game shine even brighter would be some consistency with the sprites specifically. It felt like sprites were brought in from three different games due to their design/coloring choices. On their own, each sprite looks fantastic, it's just a matter of being a little more cohesive with the design choices c: 

Oh, and the dialogue box was just a little too low for comfortable reading. I started experiencing some eye strain from looking down so much x) Though I totally get the desire to showcase all the beautiful sprites by lowering the text box! Maybe a decent compromise could be shortening the dialogue box and having the sprites stand on either side of it? But there are many other options, of course, it's just something to consider for the future.

Overall, such a lovely game! I was pleasantly surprised! You've done a fantastic job and should be proud of yourselves, best of luck with your future creative projects! 💙