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A jam submission

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A circular poem for the Twine Poetry Jam.
Submitted by Aster F — 7 days, 14 hours before the deadline
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Submitted(+1)

Interesting poem! It was a little hard to read, but the form is cool and I'm curious what the code looks like (thanks for including the credits!). Not sure how much I like it as a poem in itself, but as a piece of technological/form-based innovation, this is one for the books!

Developer(+1)

Thank you! Arguably it doesn't work as a poem "in itself" outside of the technological form? I have a google sheet with all the lines written out as they are w/o rotation and it's awful xD but shaping the poem to be inextricable from the form is the point of the jam, to my understanding.