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This is an incredible piece! Great pacing and atmosphere, and your twine prowess really shows. I loved the ominous one-liners ("Meat is preserved by salt.") and the overall coherence and polish really come together to create a well-wrought experience. Wonderful job.
Thank you so much for reading my poem! This is my first finished Twine project (even though I've got a big unfinished one) so I wasn't sure how it'd come together. I'm also glad my one liners hit the mark - I kind of peppered them in there. :)
I look forward to reading your future work!