Pixel Horror Jam 2017

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A jam submission

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Fall in love with the girl of your dreams... in your dreams.

Submitted by Rindre (@uxseries) — 3 days, 2 hours before the deadline

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Amazing visuals and a good game overall, but PLEASE improve your storytelling

Submitted

Thank you for playing! What can i do to make the storytelling better?

Well, I am not the most amazing game developer out there and this is my opinion but,

Introduction takes WAY too long.

I was , without an objective, running from room to room, clicking on every object on my way, just in case some progression may happen.

I got jumpscared, felt lost and kept looping around the place before things started and game became good.

Maybe you should try to always keep an objective (or at least a reason to roam) obvious for the player.

(read some articles maybe?)

Thanks for your submission btw

Thank you for clarifying! I'll keep these in mind as I continue working on the game!

Thank you as well for submitting to the jam! Thank you for participating!