I want to start off with saying sorry that this might be harsh. I had difficulty finding good things in this game. You did a lot of great work but it does not work well together. The character art is nice, but then cgs pop up where they look completely different. The UI does not have consistency as sliders are basic squares and tick boxes do not match the font. The main screen was very jarring to look at and although i like the idea of graffiti art, the buttons do not mesh well with the background. The save buttons have a little sticky tape that is a nice idea but it goes under the save image when you press the button. The text box for dialogue doesnt fit with the characters or the backgrounds. You default the text to be instantly shown instead of scrolling which makes it feel less polished. The music was good and the character movement animations were quite nice. I do feel that the dialogue went on too long and i got tired of talking to characters very quickly.

Sorry again this might be harsh to hear, I think you guys could pull through and make the game a lot better since i can clearly see a lot of work has been put in, you just need to collaborate better.