Hello TheOtherRealm!

I'm trying to leave feedback for as many entries as I can and got to yours. Great job on finishing! Had a few thoughts while reading:

1. It's an interesting premise and exercise. I want more mechanics to help the players latch into / escape difficult situations. Perhaps more rules for helping players step into roles of a scenario. Maybe a random table of personality traits?

2. The blocks of text are hard to parse. I know one page isn't a lot of space but white space is important. Paragraphs are needed.

3. I love the consideration you have for the players. Very key.