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A jam submission

Connection ChaosView game page

game for Bitter Sails Game Jam
Submitted by Smoolie
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  • Great job on finishing the game jam team! Loved the idea of the game and jumping from building the building. Overall, you guys did a great job for having such a short period of time! Things to consider: - If you're going to have a game where you have to use "building blocks" to get from one area to the next, I would suggest making the jumps smaller to begin with and build intensity from there. The jumps were pretty larger right off the bat, which created a situation where it was difficult to know exactly what you were supposed to be doing. Not a huge deal, but it also doesn't leave a lot of room for challenge increases. - I would love to see you guys play with different levels. Currently, you just jump from the top of each building, but I think it would be beneficial to play with the different levels of the building. You could even have the player go through different floors and show a peak of what is inside the buildings! - If you have time, I would highly suggest going through and polishing the game so you can use it as a portfolio piece. Your art sprites are all in different resolutions, so go through and make everything uniform. Add some color to the world and don't be afraid to use environmental storytelling to add some narrative to the game!

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Developer

Thanks a lot for playing,

This was my first ever game I finished and it was a lot of fun.
Thank you so much for this jam, I would deffinetly join one in the future.
Also thanks for the advice, If I have time I will try to implement your ideas.

until we meet again...
~Smoolie

Submitted

I enjoyed your game.. I like the bridge building aspect. If i had only one wish for it, it would be a marker at the edge of the screen saying where the end goal is at all times. For example, at the end of the final level, it would be nice to know you go straight across from the final sky scraper since the rest of that level, and the previous one, were all playing with vertical puzzling. if i had 2 wishes, id wish for 3 or 4 more pixels of jump height :P i was always placing my bridges just one or 2 pixels too high and having to throw myself into the void to reset. But thats just me.

You should deffinately make a little thumbnail image for this game so others are more likely to come and enjoy it, because its fun. Music was really good too.

Developer

Thank you for your feedback, the marker at the edge of the screen is a great idea and I will increase the jump height. If I have time I will add a thumbnail..

Anyway, thanks for playing :D

Submitted

This is really cool! You should add a cover photo and a little description to get more attention for it. I didn't see the instructions until after I played, but it's very intuitive and fun! Really good job! :)

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your feedback, If I have time I will add a thumbnail soon.

Thanks a lot for playing :D