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• This actually made me laugh! The calm premise, the wild twist! It has it all. It's short, it's silly, it's fun. I can see how the theme came into play, and I liked that you used the colour palette. It runs pretty smoothly, didn't have an issue. I liked the silly text-to-speech voice acting, and honestly, I really liked the art. Something about it was very charming. I could see the 'good ending' screen was pretty unfinished, but I liked the living room a lot. I guess your use of the colours helped. I'm glad you made this, and I'm glad I got to play it; it put a smile on my face. I hope you make more visual novels in the future where you have more time to flesh something out. I'd be happy to know you learned something through this jam and it inspired you to make more things. PS. I had to google the significance of the date. I should have guessed it was Halo 3's release.