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A jam submission

Spirit Express: End of the Line [DEMO]View game page

All aboard! Join Guy Fiery and a colorful cast on a trip to Yokaido. Made for the 2024 New Year, New Skills game jam!
Submitted by fruitosphere
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  • Is there a list to be notified when the full game launches because SIGN ME UP! Good application of the theme, even in such an early proof of concept. I laughed a lot playing through the demo, and I wanted to continue talking to everyone even though they had nothing new to say. It's a fun concept to go with the retirement party of someone, and the group of people around to join that celebration. What a colorful cast of characters too! You went with the right angle, getting the polish in to show the basic gameplay rather than going with as much content as you could. This shows a lot of promise in the final product, and truly for a seven day endeavor to put together it's a very good result. The vibes? Immaculate. Having the train horn in tune with the background music is a smart move, and helped with the immersive feel the artstyle and colors already brought to the table. Very smooth play, though I would make the movement a little faster if it's basically a side-scroller with visual novel elements, in case there's back and forth required. I can't wait to see the final result if you continue working on the game (and you should, it fits right in the current market of indies)!

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I love trains haha, very unique characters love the art style and dialogues! Definitly work more on it!