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A jam submission

Torn MemoriesView game page

5 Teens. 1 Van, and a Locked Warehouse. What will happen?
Submitted by Cyberpxl — 16 hours, 18 minutes before the deadline
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What makes your game a Mystery Game?
The characters are trapped in an facility for an unknown reason and have to find clues to find out the identity of their killer, and escape the warehouse!

Does your game use generative AI? And if so, in what way?
The game does not use generative AI in any way.

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okay beginner game storytelling is lackluster

Developer

Could you elaborate? I'd love to know how we could improve!

too much yapping

Developer

If you're using the word "yapping", it's hard to take your feedback seriously. "Yapping" is not a valid criticism of writing. If you could explain it in a truly constructive way and show us where you believe we could improve, that would be truly useful.

sorry, personally i think the plot has potential however i think it's a little predictable also just the chunk where they're dancing in the elevator is a bit unessicary and just more to skip though and i personally found it a little unbearable also not to shame the artists but you could improve by adding more expressions and more detailed backrounds

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the actual feedback! The plot definitely isn't the strongest, and I agree that there's a lot that could be improved. In regards to the art, that's mostly just because of a lack of time, we didn't properly get started until the last week of the jam and one our artists was sick and unable to work for portions of the jam which definitely contributed to the lack of expressions and backgrounds. We'll definitely take your feedback into consideration for our future games!

and generally bad writing/plot

Developer

"bad writing" is completely useless in helping us improve. You're obviously only trying to be negative and tell us our works suck. That's not real criticism. If you're going to say something constructive, say it, otherwise stop insulting our work.

(+1)

very nice story telling hopefully it will be finished one day!!