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A jam submission

Pencil's DreamView game page

Submitted by DocCom — 53 minutes, 33 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Use of the Limitation#773.0054.250
Concept#1202.4753.500
Overall#1202.4753.500
Presentation#1222.2983.250
Enjoyment#1282.1213.000

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Team members
DocCom

Software used
Unity, Bosca Ecoil, Aseprite

Use of the limitation
I Use "PENCIL CARBON" as the ammo and velocity of the Player at the same time

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Comments

Submitted

Hey! 

I liked the game, for what it is worth. The concept was good (being a pencil, drawing in the level around you), but the execution was a little lackluster. You game was first of all unintentionally hard, where the controls seemed to get in the way more than allow for agile movements. If this is intentional (see QWOP), you should make it very clear. Secondly, it was frustrating to have to go back to the beginning every time you died, saving no progress. 

Other than that (and the too repetitive music), the game did what it set out to do and fit the theme well! 

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback! I will try to improve my next entry on game jam.

Submitted (1 edit)

Average game.

Submitted

Always nice to see constructive criticism