Mini Jam 132: Severed

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A jam submission

Torn PagesView game page

Submitted by FavoriteSalesman1997 — 6 hours, 6 minutes before the deadline

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Results

Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Concept	#10	3.469	3.800
Use of the Limitation	#25	2.556	2.800
Overall	#35	2.556	2.800
Presentation	#42	2.191	2.400
Enjoyment	#43	2.008	2.200

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Team members
FavoriteSalesman(Coder), BottleOfChaos(Artist), Optimism_Appeared(made half of the puzzles)

Software used
Unity

Use of the limitation
The final puzzle lets you decide the ending of the Biography of fictional character Emma W.

Cookies eaten
I (favoritesalesman) ate one cookie while making this game. It came with my order of MrBeast burger. BottleOfChaos ate a lemon cupcake a few mins ago.

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KastelSubmitted1 year ago

It’s hard to tell if the pages are snapped onto the grid. Likewise, the stories are a bit too ambiguous to be spliced up and returned to their correct order. The idea does remind me of 18 Cadence where you mix and match story fragments, albeit you’re using these fragments as a story generator.

Really interesting idea at least!

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Their Time in This World

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ElporkadorSubmitted1 year ago

I think this type of game would be great for a much younger audience, but I like the chill vibes!

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Squares & Daggers

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FavoriteSalesman1997Developer1 year ago

Yeah, I wanted to make the game more difficult, but I didn't have the time (or creativity) to make any harder puzzles. Thanks for the feedback!

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SuperM7Submitted1 year ago(+1)

This is a pretty neat game idea! One thing I would say is that it would feel a little better if the pages snapped into the slots, instead of always being loose. But other than that it's pretty fun!

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Untethered and Adrift

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FavoriteSalesman1997Developer1 year ago

Thank you so much for the feedback! If I have the time to update the game I’ll do that. (it might take a little while because I have been really busy lately, but eventually I want to update both game jam games I made)

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NxhzGamesSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

The idea is very cool, I think the game has good potential

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Severed wire

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FavoriteSalesman1997Developer1 year ago

Tsym!!

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