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• Nice game
• The game is a little short… with the perfect PowerPoint i was expecting pictures tbh…
• I really like your visual with the two cats ;-) Including [[start]] in the endings makes it easier for players to start over, well done! Don't hesitate to integrate choices in your text to make gameplay even more natural. For example, rather than creating options after your text, as you did here: Louis talks about going to the forest while Milo insists on going towards the highway. Do you choose Milo's or Louis' opinion? [[Louis]] [[Milo]] You could have done this instead: Louis talks about going to [[the forest]] while Milo insists on going towards [[the highway]]. This also reduces the number of words ;-) Also, don't forget to proofread the game text; there are a couple of spelling mistakes that could have been easily avoided (eg. "eraly" --> early).