LE03 P24 Tiny Twine jam

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A jam submission

The lost explorerView game page

Submitted by Ivandjoko — 21 hours, 59 minutes before the deadline

Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Number of words (300 words or less)	#2	n/a	n/a
Language (grammar and vocabulary)	#2	n/a	n/a
Story	#8	3.700	3.700
Gameplay	#8	3.350	3.350
Overall	#10	3.567	3.567
Originality	#12	3.650	3.650

Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback is anonymous.

"ruin" is a noun that means the state of ruin, the action that causes it or the destruction itself. You should use "ruins" for the remains of old constructions (castles or temples for exemple). Fo some endings, the story isn't really finished, but we don't have any options to choose from. You should loop back to a passage where we can continue the story until the end. For exemple here: "Don't be afraid, be focus !" --> you should loop back to the previous passage, where Amelia can open the door.